You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.
write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,
Describe the situation
Explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
Say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir,
I am writing you with reference to the room accomodation. I would like to bring it to your notice that presently I am staying in a sharing accomodation but this has become a serious problem for me.
my roommate, Akanksha and myself are having ampleof issues which often ends up into ugly fights. she drinks in the room and plays loud music. All this creates lot of disturbance for me while I study. Her friends are there in the room most of the time which disturbs me. Whenever I request them to go out and allow me to study they ignore me or fights with me.
The girl I am sharing my room also have short attendance in the college and is not at all bothered about her studies. she is from a rich family and is very carefree about her career. Therefore, I request you to change my room as soon as possible as things are not at all working out with us. I would be really great if you can provide me with a single room as our exams are approaching and adjusting with a new room partner will again be a time consuming task.
I hope you will surely take my matter into consideration and look forward for the help from your side.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...s which often ends up into ugly fights. she drinks in the room and plays loud music...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
... not at all bothered about her studies. she is from a rich family and is very caref...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, therefore, while, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26605504587 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35779816514 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600917431193 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5047299495 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226310693018 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812220248591 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623385391616 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133302886563 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691610100926 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.19 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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