Ready to eat meals are very much welcoming by people these days. People prefer to eat readymade food in comparison to the homemade food. In this essay, I shall be discussing both the sides of the coin and therefore will look into the advantages and disadvantages of the fact.
Very much popular ready to eat dishes are especially of interest to the working class of the society. Specifically, if we discuss about families where both the parents are working, readymade food plays a ley role in breaking down the hunger of there kids. In the morning, when couples are rushing for there jobs, they can atleast eat something rather than being empty stomach. Even during evening, if someone is to tired to cook, this food is very much helpful in stomach filling.
On the other hand, if we discuss the negative side of this, this ready to eat food is not at all healthy for our health. The immune system of the people is very much effected by eating such food. They fall sick every second day. This food if not preserved properly, turns stale. In order to maintain a healthy and balanced lifestyle, such food can never take the place of homemade food. Homemade food is fresh and contains all the nutritions which helps in healthy body and mind.
Other then this, homemade food is also of importance as it is cooked with emotions. Mother cooks the food for a child and husband and serves them with love. This also helps instrengthening their love bond. Additionally, there are plethora of dishes that one can cook at home as per the choice and mood.
Therefore, I would hammer upon the nail and pen down saying that homemade food should be prefered in comparison to ready to eat food as it has more emotions and is also healthy.
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Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, second, so, then, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64820846906 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38611299186 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550488599349 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8031131265 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2777777778 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0555555556 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333860593127 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103357970777 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080353315536 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190878132906 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105372098251 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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