Dear sir,
I am writing to request you to change my current accommodation with another non-sharing single occupancy. This is Manoj Rao, B.S.C 3rd year student from Rohtak university. Six months before, I was allotted room number 406, double sharing ground floor in Building A.Currently, I am sharing the occupancy with another student named Rohan.
I would like to change the accommodation due to the frequent visitors of a roommate. Most of the time, his friends come to our room for the late-night parties and drinking. In such an environment, it is difficult to focus on studies. I have informed the same to him multiple times but all fell into the deaf ears. Had I not faced the situation, I would have scored high marks in the previous test.
Considering the above- mentioned fact, I would like to shift into another non-sharing single room before the end of this month. As next months onwards, our preliminary tests are supposed to start.
Hopefully, you understand the gravity of the matter and would allot new occupancy without a delay.
Thanks for the consideration.
Yours Sincerely,
HJKK
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...onsideration. Yours Sincerely, HJKK
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.125 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8114115201 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673913043478 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8918136876 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5384615385 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1538461538 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.538461538462 4.34317383033 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199500745575 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550127905007 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062162505109 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845345321736 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844111048257 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.