You lost some valuables during a train journey. Write a letter to the station manager requesting his/her help in finding your lost items.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you to report my lost item on one of your trains.
My item was a small white gift bag, it was really precious to me and gifted by my husband on our first anniversary. Inside there was a blue box consist valuable bracelet with a brand name 'Swarovski' worth 500 pounds. Moreover, a guarantee card of 3 years warranty also 100 pounds coupons.
I must have lost the bracelet between 5:15 - 6:15 (Peak hours) while traveling to southbound on circle line towards Wembley on Monday 17th July 2018 evening. If I recall I was sitting in the second carriage near to the door.
could you please tell me the bracelet of this description has been found. You can contact me on 78654321. If you have it please keep it safe. I will make arrangements to collect it from you at your earlier convenience.
Thanks in advance
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 157, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...mbley on Monday 17th July 2018 evening. If I recall I was sitting in the second ca...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Could
...he second carriage near to the door. could you please tell me the bracelet of this...
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Line 9, column 107, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... found. You can contact me on 78654321. If you have it please keep it safe. I will...
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Line 9, column 122, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pleases'?
Suggestion: pleases
... contact me on 78654321. If you have it please keep it safe. I will make arrangements ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, really, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 703.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.625 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48951837484 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.717105263158 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6341677005 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.9090909091 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8181818182 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126510860529 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442901069943 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052843427242 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910544621713 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757248582814 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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