You missed a flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter
Describe what happened that caused you to miss the flight – Explain how missing your flight affected you – Make it clear what you would like the airline to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing a letter to take into your kind consideration that I couldn’t able to take my flight to France on Wednesday night due to issues highlighted below.
I left my house at 10 o clock considering 60 minutes before the scheduled departure and reached the entrance gate of the airport at around 10:20 where I have to wait for approximately over 30 minutes because of the long queue out there. In addition to that, I have been asked by the immigration officers to wait for another 20 minutes in the airport lounge as they would like to check the authenticity of my visa through the central control system which was running slowly due to internet speed.
Once I reach the airline’s counter, the boarding time was over, and I didn’t get the boarding pass to fly to France for a business deal. This caused me a huge financial loss as I was due to present my company’s proposal for a Giga project, but it has assigned to one of my competitors despite my lower billing rate.
Considering the above-mentioned scenario, I would request you to please refund my full ticket as I am already bearing a hefty lose while not reaching to France to present my company’s proposal for a prestigious project.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing a letter to take into your ...
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Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... night due to issues highlighted below. I left my house at 10 o clock considerin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, then, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84513274336 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99017172552 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641592920354 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 16.3608247423 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.4684633559 44.8134815571 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.428571429 76.5299724578 204% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 32.2857142857 16.8248392259 192% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131342644286 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665904141704 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424417260831 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784987890147 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418794493204 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 8.37731958763 210% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 70.7449484536 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 7.45979381443 196% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 8.54432989691 173% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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