My name is Zara Salim, i belong to Karachi Pakistan. It is my complain letter regarding your airline Pakistan International Airline.
I am feeling depressed just because of your airline service and time management. Well I think that, PIA, is one of the most leading airline in all over the Pakistan. Unfortunately, I m completely wrong.
Yesterday, I had a flight at 10:00 AM, in morning. Flight no is PIA 702, from lahore to karachi.But due to miscommunication from your side. I was late because they did not provide valid information regarding my flight.
When I reached in airport at 9:00 AM. Firstly I was in checking room, but due to the shortage of staff. They waited me alot, approx 40 minutes. after that, when I reached counter centre for further process, my flight had been cancelled for the next day just because of engine troubleshoot.
It is my claim to you, kindly return back my money as soon as possible. Otherwise, I will claim your airline. For further query you can call me on my number 00235678890.
Yours client,
Zara Salim.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
My name is Zara Salim, i belong to Karachi Pakistan. It is my co...
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Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: NOW[3]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... flight at 10:00 AM, in morning. Flight no is PIA 702, from lahore to karachi.But ...
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Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...t no is PIA 702, from lahore to karachi.But due to miscommunication from your side....
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Line 7, column 145, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...They waited me alot, approx 40 minutes. after that, when I reached counter centre for...
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Line 9, column 31, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...shoot. It is my claim to you, kindly return back my money as soon as possible. Otherwise...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, regarding, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84065934066 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86386044614 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659340659341 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4382554845 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.0625 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.375 16.8248392259 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0625 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149166412975 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439986281518 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357501478484 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773027043046 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364307503997 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.61 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.