obesity is an immense issue right now. Even, plethora amount of developing countries which are facing that kind of problems. Moreover, the ratio is continuously increasing just because of improper diet, junk food, lack of exercise and many more. I will discuss both points problem and solution with the help of relevant example.
At began with, there are three major problems why obesity has been increasing for last few years? Firstly, majority of juveniles are love to eat junk food in the form of burgers, pizza and hard drink. They are directly effect on body and result is that when they grow older there body has indulged in various diseases such as diabetes, heart issues and many more.
Secondly, nowadays, children likes to play indoor games rather than outdoor game. It is one of the major cause of increase overweight. Thirdly, many developing countries have very limited resources of health center in the form of play ground, stadium where youngster are playing outdoor game and do perform different kind of activities such as hockey, cricket, badminton etc. Few health center are available but unfortunately, they are charge expensive fees that's why majority students are spend there time at home after school and college. I think these are major disadvantages.
On the other hand, few remedies are resolve that kind of pathetic issues. firstly, parents start to take step and groom itself how they bestow best diet to their child. For instances, Children Fitness is one of the most proverbial website on google which provide free of cost instruction regarding children evolution and it has gotten 100% results. Even, majority of children are getting fit just because of proper diet and exercise. Furthermore, government should provide facilities to youngster and try to conduct many health issues seminars where parents are enhance there knowledge and aid to protect there children in better way. School has instead responsible to increase various activities with the help of instructors.
To put in it nutshell, I pen down saying that obesity can generate many health issues. We can remove it with the help of useful actions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, i think, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15714285714 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53156562028 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594285714286 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.120144124 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.25 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233908210054 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563587173984 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401025985623 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11320917103 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277449462678 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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