Dear Mr. Joja
I am Mr. Noman Moka the father of one of your students my lovely som Joka with std. ID 2015; he is in the 2nd grade section 03. in the meantime, I know he is working hard to improve his reading skills since he has problems in his tongue. But, I hope that he is doing well during this semester. Really, I am writing this letter to inform that we are going to another city on the coming Thursday in order to attend my sister wedding. So, my son will be absent for that day.
Really, we are going to prepare a small play for my sister, and our small kids in the family will do this play. my little son Joka will be the singer during this play and he is going to sing one popular poem since his voice is very good and he is saving it. Therefore, we highly appreciate if you can email us with the required material that my son will miss it on Thursday in order to explain everything for him before next week, so he will be ready and will not delay his colleague in the class.
Looking forward to hearing from you at the nearest future.
Your Sincerely
Noman Moka
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.15165876777 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.03182159772 2.54303337028 80% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592417061611 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.465525814 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6363636364 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169025547631 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676828626041 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646041278334 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938686291883 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510602995671 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.79 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.