Dear Rohit,
Hope you are doing Good!!!
I am writing this letter to seek a favour from you, can you please accompany me in doing workout. Recently i have become overweight due to my bad eating habits along with the laziness which you are well aware of. Therefore I have decided to do some workout and get back in shape and doing that your help will immensely needed.
For the beginning, I am thinking to go out for a run in the morning. It will help to warm up and may prepare for later workout, following that my plan is to get a gym membership
or swimming club whatever suits you best. For me I would like to join a gym as we can have full body workout as well as it can make us more attractive.
All of these above plans can only be translated into relaity once you join me because you are well aware of my procrastination habits. So i need someone to push me and also to guide me as you are already into fitness. In addition to this with your support I can be regular and at the same time can achieve my goals early.
Yours faithfully
Gunjan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...e laziness which you are well aware of. Therefore I have decided to do some workout and g...
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Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
...and doing that your help will immensely needed. For the beginning, I am thinking to...
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Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that my plan is to get a gym membership or swimming club whatever suits you best...
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Line 10, column 139, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... aware of my procrastination habits. So i need someone to push me and also to gui...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, so, therefore, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25123152709 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33985480897 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.1038779081 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303888233986 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117105248503 0.0766984524023 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982294366301 0.0603063233224 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182583645366 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107664181379 0.0580467560999 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.37 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.