Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing this letter to submit my request to you, because I need to recover from the car accident last Wensday. After the doctcor told me my rehabilitation plan, I would like to tell you my conditions and subsequent work.
It was a serious car crash that day, a truck on the left hit my car, my right leg was broken since it was stuck with the brake when I wanted to stop. Now I am still at hospital where the doctor told me it would take three months to recover. This is a long time but I do not want to delay my work as well as the project I am working on. Thus I would like to discuss this with you that during these days, can I work remotely? I can make phone calls to you to report daily. As for he work can be done online,I will try my best to finish it in time. If not I would like to ask Peter in my team to do if together. If I were required to attend some meeting, I suggest we can do in it by web-meeting software.
I am sorry to bring so many obstacles to our company, I am waiting for your response eagerly.
Sincererly,
Tony
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 336, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...as well as the project I am working on. Thus I would like to discuss this with you t...
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Line 4, column 474, Rule ID: HE_THE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'for the work'?
Suggestion: for the work
... phone calls to you to report daily. As for he work can be done online,I will try my best t...
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Line 4, column 504, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...daily. As for he work can be done online,I will try my best to finish it in time. ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, thus, well, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 3.97674418605 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28169758328 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618604651163 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2060748341 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7272727273 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152082158172 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544526926561 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468602696877 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11067552791 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382649655534 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.8 8.71597938144 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.