You need to take some time off from your job and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager.
In your letter
explain why you want to take time off work
give details of the amount of time you need
suggest how your work could be done while you are away
Dear Mr. Carberry,
I am writing to request you to approve my leaves to spend some quality time with my wife and children, as I am planning a trip to Miami, USA . It's been a long time since I have spent some leisure time with my family. Nevertheless, I am working hard on Tableau project for a while, so I want to take a short break from work which could be helpful to relax my mind.
The trip will start from August 7th, 2019 and will last till August 14th 2019, to be more precise, I will be on 10 days casual leaves. I have already 30 casual leaves available in my annual leave management system account. As soon as you approve my leaves, I will apply in online portal.
As you know, I am working on a Tableau project which requires some details from onshore team. I have sent sales dashboard and further requirement to the client for their feedback. In my absence, most of my tasks will be taken care by Sanjey, who knows my daily activities very well.
I am looking forward to hearing from you on leaves approval as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Jay Larosa
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...n, as I am planning a trip to Miami, USA . Its been a long time since I have spent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, nevertheless, so, well, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36186923359 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2314627457 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5454545455 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185590644274 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739648844184 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520226482005 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930987097611 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487915792627 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.