You normally go shopping in the area where you live. However, you think some of the facilities for shoppers could be improved.Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter:•say in general what you like about shopping in your area•say what is
Dear Sir,
I would like to share my feedback with your newspaper 'The Daily Post' with regards to our local community shopping area called 'Fishmarket' which is accomodating needs of thousands of shoppers on daily basis.
To start with, central location of 'Fishmarket' is the key factor which attract enormous coustomers for their buying needs. Also, buyers always prefer good and fresh quality products on reasonable rates and undoubtly our local market is serving for this purpose at the best.
However, our local market is not flawless and needs certain imporvements for instance, waste management is not up to date due to lack of bins on regular places. Apart from this, during late evening and night, lighthing arrangements are inediquate which lead to many accidents. One last thing, toilets are often found unhyginic and uncleaned which give very bad impression on shoppers.
Kindly publish my concerns in your newspaper if you find it worth and genuine.If you want to cross check my statements you can send your reporter to cross examin facts.
Yours faithfully,
singh
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- You normally go shopping in the area where you live. However, you think some of the facilities for shoppers could be improved.Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter:•say in general what you like about shopping in your area•say what is 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I would like to share my feedback with y...
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Line 8, column 79, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...spaper if you find it worth and genuine.If you want to cross check my statements y...
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Line 8, column 79, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...spaper if you find it worth and genuine.If you want to cross check my statements y...
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Line 10, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ross examin facts. Yours faithfully, singh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, apart from, for instance, in fact, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22285714286 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56943414719 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.725714285714 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.5676647284 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.25 76.5299724578 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 4.34317383033 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202949769778 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716372369571 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762466020362 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105506751465 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827445939145 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 8.71597938144 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.