You ordered a book online for exam preparation. It has been some time since you ordered it and you still have not received your book. Write a letter to the e-commerce company about this.
• describe your purchase order of the book
• explain the importance of the book
• say what you want the company to do for you.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Reha Mehmet Erol, I am writing this letter to request information about my recent order from your website.
I ordered a book which is called “Macroeconomics” on 27th of June, however, I still did not receive the item. The purchase order of the book is ISSN100, which could be helpful for you to find my purchase.
The book is significant for my studies because I have a midterm exam next week. Therefore, I immediately need the book not to stay behind in the classes. Apart from that I do not have a chance to buy the book from a bookstore or borrow it from the university library due to its unavailability.
I request you to send the product in 2 days and I ask you to post the parcel with a 20 dollar gift card to compensate my dissatisfaction.
I look forward to hearing from you and hope not to experience this type of incident again.
Yours Faithfully,
Ali Larter
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, still, therefore, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59523809524 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15741128644 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.402520789 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7777777778 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357923657218 0.216113520407 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129717955946 0.0766984524023 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638219918854 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163276239653 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722751509803 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.