you ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing. Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.
Dear Sir,
I am a regular patron at your bank for the last couple of years. I am writing to complain about a cheque book which was ordered by me last month.
First of all, I want you to know that I have been operating a chequing account since 2014. Last month, I have visited at your bank and fulfill all the requirements to get a cheque book and one of your employees told me that you would receive it within two weeks via mail. But unfortunately, I have not received such book till now. Moreover, it has been a month since I requested it. Due to this, I usually face a lot of problems to make financial transactions which are related to my business sector.
Given the circumstances, My humble request is that please make an inquiry about an aforesaid matter and send me a new cheque book at the earliest possible. I am eagerly waiting for your reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Harrie
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 341, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t received such book till now. Moreover, it has been a month since I requested it...
^^
Line 10, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... your reply. Yours Sincerely, Harrie
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, moreover, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 731.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48466257669 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58314994349 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644171779141 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9040708082 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286994378817 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100390488638 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847422413376 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17392571153 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609378910195 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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