Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to show my annoyance towards the service of your bank. Two weeks ago, I ordered a new cheque book from your bank, and to my astonishment I have not received it yet.
I ordered for the cheque book by filling a request form at your Clock Tower branch itself. Since then, there is no information for the same. I would like to know how much more time will it take for the procedure. I require the same urgently as I need to pay some bills which can be paid only through cheque.
Also, I would like you to inquire about the delay and take strict accordingly. Waiting for your revert as this kind of inconvenience is not acceptable from a reputed bank like yours.
Yours faithfully
Nick
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, so, then, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 597.0 937.175257732 64% => OK
No of words: 134.0 206.0 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4552238806 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41141794625 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.701492537313 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 182.7 290.88556701 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.2551582234 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.3333333333 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8888888889 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299872362513 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102403084079 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107955767831 0.0603063233224 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184083950314 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875040681698 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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