Dear Sir,
I, Aaron, am writing to thank you from the bottom of my heart as we had an wonderful birthday party which was held at your hotel last week.
Last week was my grandfather’s 90’s birthday and my parents and I decided to organize a party to celebrate that day. We booked a hall which could afford 20 tables on first floor. To my surprise, the hall was large than I thought, and there is a small stage in the front of the hall.
On that day, I am glad to see that the hall was decorated by flowers and balloons. More than 180 friends and relatives came to see my grandfather and the most of them said the hall was very nice. Some of my relatives used the stage to sing songs for my grandfathers and dance happily during the party. We had a very pleasant evening.
By the way, the waiter named Chen Long was so friendly and professional. He helped us set up the volume of the speakers in their best conditions. That’s why we liked to played on the stage.
All-in-all, my grandfather had a wonderful birthday party and all my guests enjoyed a lot at your hotel. Once again a big thank to you and your staffs.
Yours sincerely.
Aaron
- You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your lettergive the details of the partythe reason why the party was 73
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- Don t have a term time holiday 73
- You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion and you were very pleased with the food and service Write a letter to the restaurant In your letter give details of your visit to the restaurant explain the reason for the cel 76
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 11, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
Dear Sir, I, Aaron, am writing to thank you from the bottom of...
^^
Line 2, column 73, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...u from the bottom of my heart as we had an wonderful birthday party which was held...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43981481481 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59291912626 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7767672892 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7692307692 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.61538461538 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195447310791 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612328044041 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650914240989 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120232350018 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081510997907 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.