You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.
Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your letter
give the details of the party
the reason why the party was so successful
mention things that helped you a lot/good service provided by the staff of the hotel
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for the birthday party which was conducted on January 11, 2019, at 7 PM at your hotel. Although it was a last-minute booking done by me, you handled it with extreme pleasure and patience and arranging such a yummy and delicious sugar-free cake was simply superb. Everyone liked the cake and was amazed by the arrangements especially the alfresco dining area. Mexican cuisine was a delicacy. I must say pre-requisites were very well taken care of. The hospitality was wonderful and the staff was very courteous.
It was my grandfather's anniversary bash and was of great importance to me as he always makes my every event a memorable one so it was just a way of returning the favour to him. All in all, you made it an impressive event.
However, I would like to suggest you introduce some corporate discounts, discount cards or weekend discounts to your regular customers. this would definitely attract more and more customer. I hope you like my suggestion.
Once again a big thank to you and your staff.
Yours faithfully,
Sam
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...gain a big thank to you and your staff. Yours faithfully, Sam
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89893617021 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84085880033 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696808510638 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5938202281 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8461538462 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4615384615 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.30769230769 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199635444278 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580928085851 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651753118482 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987248890639 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548972852285 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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