You own an old item that you think is valuable and would like to sell. Write a letter to the owner of an antiques shop.
In your letter
• explain how you found the shop
• describe the item that you would like to sell
• say how much you would like to sell the item for
Dear Sir/Mam,
My name is Rehana Diwan and I am writing this letter about an ancient product which I own, want to sell.
Luckily I got your reference from one of my best friends who has been not only having relation with you but also your veteran customer. Last night we were just gossiping and by chance, we landed on antique products. Ultimately he referred me your name.
Well, I have an almost 200 years old currency coin. If I talk about its look then it is incredibly beautiful as well as having the best condition, means it looks like new one. Perhaps, this was used by Mughals when they were ruling. It contains half gold and silver and it has magnificient carving which makes this coin unique in terms of soberness.
Indeed, this is the precious coin, so I would like to sell it for Rs. 25,000/-. Although I can get a higher rate somewhere, I would like to sell to you because you are my friend’s friend.
Hope you will like this offer and look forward for a positive reply.
Yours faithfully,
Rehana Diwan.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-06-21 | Rehana Diwan | 47 | view |
| 2021-06-19 | Abdul Rehman | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53225806452 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36001909687 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.720430107527 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3764898667 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.25 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267332812779 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827838382528 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859817367601 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148118333664 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0975345782652 0.0580467560999 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.