you plan to apply for a course at a language school in London. Write a letter to the school administration.
1) Explain why you want to take a language course
2)Give information about yourself
3) ask for information about fees and accommodation.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to enquire about an intensive English crash course at your language school. I would like to enroll for the course in order to prepare for the IELTS test which I plan to take on next month.
I am a hard-working student living in India, and I would like to proficient in English. I have already attained an upper-intermediate level of English but would like to get an advanced level of English in speaking and reading.
In fact, I would like to maximize the level of my English because I am going to apply for vocational training abroad; therefore, I need to get high band score in the IELTS to receive this training.
Would you mind informing me about the fees structure of this course? I would also like to know if you give accommodation for language learners from abroad.
Thank you for your time and help. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Best Regards,
Atul Dixit
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t which I plan to take on next month. I am a hard-working student living in Ind...
^
Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... I would like to proficient in English. I have already attained an upper-intermed...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, therefore, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66871165644 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70045990928 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58282208589 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7437433252 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257566840638 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107053385172 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901864472427 0.0603063233224 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157435966521 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122760899406 0.0580467560999 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.