Dear Mr.John,
I am writing to enquire about your three weeks advance English course which is going to start from next month. Since I have registered myself for the IELTS test, I would like to enroll myself for this course.
I am a graduate student from India. Although I have completed my education through English medium board, I am intended to excel my level from intermediate to advance. I am wondering to opt for a full-time job in the Marketing domain, to get the job I require to score at least Band 8 in IELTS. As I have heard positive feedback about your school, therefore, I am keen to join it at the earliest.
Would you mind if you share the fees structure of the course? Recently, I have come across the discount deal of the program.
I would appreciate if you provide insight on foreign student accommodation service at your school.
Thanks for all your time and assistance. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Ankit Mehta
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: John
Dear Mr.John, I am writing to enquire about your ...
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Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'scoring'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: scoring
...keting domain, to get the job I require to score at least Band 8 in IELTS. As I have hea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, therefore, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7485380117 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61296863262 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643274853801 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6298110227 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.6666666667 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183033924192 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652514771171 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566060171371 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111447955146 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187703382786 0.0580467560999 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.