You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:•

Dear Alex,

I am apologizing about, that I not visit you in the hospital. I hope you are well and recovering from your accident and that it is not too boring in hospital.

Perhaps you should be informed that the match on Sunday was hardness game. Atmosphere in the stadium was surreal. The match ended 1-1 after extra time. Our goalkeeper tragically missed hand ball last minute penalty. The match was disappointing, I and all our team was exhausted.

I think the weather was to blame and we never played in such composition of the team. Weather was rainy and cloudy we sliding around in mud.

Let us know when you are going home and we will arrange with your doctor to help you recover faster and start training for the next game. The rest of the team send their regards, we are waiting for your recovery, do not remember we need you on the final!

Best wishes,
Donald

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Alex, Im apologizing about, that I not visit you...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...ding around in mud. Let us know when youre going home and we will arrange with you...
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Line 9, column 212, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ards, we are waiting for your recovery, dont remember we need you on the final! B...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
well, as to, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 729.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67307692308 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33004664267 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9501160773 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.2727272727 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1818181818 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.81818181818 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234045964782 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793188202352 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056404867221 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135719434665 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642523207273 0.0580467560999 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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