You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
-tell him which team won
-describe the conditions on the day
-see how if you felt about the match.
Dear John
I was sorry, when I hear about your accident. I hope now quite well and that is not so boring in the hospital. The purpose of mine to penning down this epistle is to tell you all scenario of the match, which was held on, last Sunday.
The match was very disappointing. The score was two all, probably because, you was not there to score the extra goal. The awful thing was that we were winning until 10 minutes before the end, but suddenly they score another goal. I was very shocked, when I was the ball hit the block of the net.
Moreover, I think the weather was to blame. It was really a very day and the pitch was very muddy. At the end of the day, no one could able to saw the grass properly. The ground was very slippery and everyone feel exhausted because of it. I am not satisfied with this match, because everybody done a lot of efforts for winning this match but the aftermaths are not as per as our expectations.
All the team members send their regards for you and I hope you will fine very soon and next match, we will play together.
Yours truly
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John I was sorry, when I hear about your acci...
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Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y. The match was very disappointing. The score was two all, probably because, yo...
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Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... was not there to score the extra goal. The awful thing was that we were winning un...
^^^
Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... we were winning until 10 minutes before the end, but suddenly they score another...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, really, so, well, as to, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29468599034 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15396104441 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5920700677 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.5 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7857142857 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35714285714 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148727077022 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502152035345 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549429431518 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105645729301 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681198616029 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.01 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.47 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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