You’re interested in a music course that you saw on an advertise. Write a letter to the club.
In your letter, you should:
explain why you’re interested
request more information about the course
talk about your past experiences.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in response to the advertisement of a music course that your club is offering and would like to express my keen interest in it.
Music is my passion, and I have been listening to different types of music since my childhood. However, my interest in this course increased when I read that some professional musician will also teach in the club. I have learnt playing music in different institutes but learning from experts is the main reason why I want to join it.
I would like to inquire some information reading classes. First of all, the duration of it was not mentioned. Would you please explain complete time frame and specify different types of music that will be taught in it? Also, could you tell me, if the club offers any membership or discount thereof?
My experience of music is more than seven years as I opted for arts in my school. There are several musical instruments that I can play splendidly, such as violin, guitar, piano. My skills of playing violin and guitar made me distinctive in different concerts and also was awarded multiple times for it.
I am looking forward to further hearing from you soon about this great learning opportunity.
Yours faithfully,
Salman Khan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to play'.
Suggestion: to play
...l also teach in the club. I have learnt playing music in different institutes but learn...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85514018692 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61341985061 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635514018692 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7402188325 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9230769231 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4615384615 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206339163109 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067073927895 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542609461097 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115676774381 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562668787764 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.