You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter
1) explain why you have moved.
2) describe the new house.
3) Invite your friend to come and visit.
Dear Dave,
I am writing to let you know that at last we have moved to a bigger house! We just couldn't go on living in the two-bedroom bungalow now that the twins are growing up and the new baby has arrived. So we started looking - and one thing led to another and finally here we are in our new home.
i'm sure you'll like it. We have three bedrooms now, and a very modern bathroom and kitchen. The kids are happy because there is much more space with the big living room and the garden outside. But Michael is the happiest of all because he doesn't need to do much decorating.
Why don't you come around this weekend and see what you think of our new place? We would all love to see you and if the weather is good we can have barbecue in the garden.
Our new address and phone number are below, so give us a call and let us know when to expect you.
Lots of love,
EK
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...e have moved to a bigger house! We just couldnt go on living in the two-bedroom bungalo...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Im
...finally here we are in our new home. im sure youll like it. We have three bedro...
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Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...here we are in our new home. im sure youll like it. We have three bedrooms now, an...
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Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...chael is the happiest of all because he doesnt need to do much decorating. Why dont...
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Line 7, column 5, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...esnt need to do much decorating. Why dont you come around this weekend and see wh...
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Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'barbecued'.
Suggestion: barbecued
... and if the weather is good we can have barbecue in the garden. Our new address and p...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 710.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.10404624277 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.93489624801 2.54303337028 76% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664739884393 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5624858134 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159516911377 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552977259097 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599162850484 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971218123426 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594146843509 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.2 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.21 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 41.2886597938 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.