You receive an email from a friend which talks about his work life. Read the following extract and write
a reply giving them advice about the situation.
Dear Frank,
Thank you for your letter asking for my advice about what you should or can do in the situation about you work hours. I realize how difficult for you to burn the candle at both end and without getting in touch with your wife Vanessa and as well as with your kids. From the content of your letter, i comprehend that you don't have enough time to do it.
So, first of all, i suggest you to take a vacation for some days and go somewhere to picnic or to sites, where you will be engaged with your family. It would be the best time for you to re-establish family relations with your wife and kids and don't think that you will miss something crucial at work, because right now you are suffering from burnout, which can lead to lose your productivity, so i recommend you to take enough time to spend with your family on a vacation. It will take you away from stamina and work pressure.
Furthermore, i want to advocate one more thing. It will be great if you take a part time job also. I know you love your work, however the more you work, the more you will get stressed and feel stamina. Life is too short, so be more attentive to your family and health as well as.
I hope you will take my suggestions into your consideration.
Best regards,
Smith
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- You receive an email from a friend which talks about his work life Read the following extract and write a reply giving them advice about the situation 73
- Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar which causes many health problems Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar Do you agree or disagree 84
- Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time Which of these situations do think is better 73
- It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends Do you agree or disagree 61
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 298, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... kids. From the content of your letter, i comprehend that you dont have enough ti...
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Line 2, column 320, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...t of your letter, i comprehend that you dont have enough time to do it. So, first o...
^^^^
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nough time to do it. So, first of all, i suggest you to take a vacation for so...
^
Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... So, first of all, i suggest you to take a vacation for some days and go somewhe...
^^^
Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t you to take a vacation for some days and go somewhere to picnic or to sites, ...
^^
Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...y relations with your wife and kids and dont think that you will miss something cruc...
^^^^
Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... can lead to lose your productivity, so i recommend you to take enough time to sp...
^
Line 4, column 14, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...amina and work pressure. Furthermore, i want to advocate one more thing. It wil...
^
Line 4, column 80, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...e thing. It will be great if you take a part time job also. I know you love your work, ho...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 94, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ll be great if you take a part time job also. I know you love your work, however the...
^^^^
Line 4, column 282, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to your family and health as well as. I hope you will take my suggestions into...
^^^
Line 7, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur consideration. Best regards, Smith
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29288702929 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26384966779 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548117154812 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.1041863685 44.8134815571 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158595196971 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668886344055 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635840113048 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101000943118 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457013471421 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.