You received a letter from a friends asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Dear James,
I am writing a reply letter to you who is clearly in a dilemma about getting a degree or looking for employment. I strongly suggest you to get a job.
It is obvious your parents want you to enroll in college but you need to follow your heart instead of listening to your parent's words. Your passion about cooking and your dream to have your own restaurant is really tangible. Moreover, culinary skills require more practical experiences rather than sitting in the class.
Going to college was a stepping stone to a better job in the past. Nowadays, getting a degree is not sufficient to start a professional career and promote in it. I recommend you to consider that unemployment rates of graduate students have extremely increased in our country in the last decade. Frankly, you can acquire practical skills at school but it is limited. Hence, the best way to learn specialist skills is by experience in a real working environment.
On the one hand, you can look for a position in a restaurant with a top chef because this can be really suitable for you since you do not have any relevant experience at first. This being the case, you can improve your expertise in culinary skills by watching and learning from your senior colleagues. On the other hand, you can run your own restaurant as a manager and recruit some cooks and a head-chef so you can provide exotic foods, a nice atmosphere and friendly service.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,
Tommy Comperor
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2016-12-19 | Manpreet86 | 91 | view |
- Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film starts, pop musicians and sports starts) are paid too much money.Do you agree or disagree?Which other type of jobs should be highly paid? 70
- Nowadays leisure industry products and modern gadgets are widely used by young people The use of these products reduces the young generation s creativity Do you agree or disagree with this statement Give your own opinion 83
- You received a letter from a friends asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. 78
- You received a letter from a friends asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. 78
- You received a letter from a friends asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, frankly, hence, look, moreover, really, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 937.175257732 134% => OK
No of words: 263.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77946768061 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65498908148 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585551330798 0.622605031667 94% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3393980814 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271171701679 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979427064787 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885353245987 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173070105015 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0939054707535 0.0580467560999 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.