Dear Surendra,
I was really ecstatic upon receiving your letter. So you have finally completed your secondary education. As you were seeking my advice to plan your next step, as to join a college or a job, I am reverting through this letter.
Being so intellectual, I would suggest that you join a college. You can easily clear the IIT exam and can pursue your studies in B.Tech. Considering your financial conditions, I would recommend you to apply for an educational loan. Graduating from a good college would enhance your skills and would offer you good placement opportunities in various Multi National Companies. You may also get an opportunity to earn during your internship programs, as most companies nowadays are also offering allowances. This might help you to manage your daily expenses. If you choose to get a job, I fear that you may get entirely deviated from your studies, once you start earning.
This was just my personal advice. I know you are wise enough to take your decisions.
Wishing you success for your future.
Your friend,
Manpreet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... IIT exam and can pursue your studies in B.Tech. Considering your financial condi...
^^
Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Tech
... exam and can pursue your studies in B.Tech. Considering your financial conditions,...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, may, really, second, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01675977654 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70627580197 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63687150838 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9506013317 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.1428571429 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7857142857 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278597042686 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10185226992 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775536471535 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159443803996 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072385463219 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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