You received a letter from your friend informing you about his elderly parents are coming to visit in your area and he is asking for your advise on
- which places they should visit
- where should they live
- Invite them to do something with you
Dear Gaurav,
I am happy to receive your letter last week and excited to know that your parents are visiting Delhi. It will be a real pleasure for me to assist them in making this stay quite memorable.
As you know, their are multiple places to visit in this city especially the chandni chowk market which has variety of tasty food items to be served. I also suggest them to visit Bangla sahib gurdwara as they are very much inclined towards visiting devotional places. Another good option will be to plan visit to Taj Mahal, this is the only place from our country which is included in 7 wonders of world and is only 2 hours drive away.
Admittedly, the location where you stay plays a key role for comfortable stay. I insist to book room in one of the hotels at aerocity, this place has corridor of hotels from well known International brands such as Lemmon Tree, Taj and Novotel. Moreover, this play is just 10 minutes away from the airport and chances of traffic issues are almost negligible. I would also like to host dinner for them at my place so that they get opportunity to meet my parents and can enjoy home cooked food for a day.
I will look forward to have your views on this plan and accordingly will make required logistics arrangements. Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours sincereley,
chomu kumar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...em in making this stay quite memorable. As you know, their are multiple places t...
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Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...tay quite memorable. As you know, their are multiple places to visit in this ci...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 21, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to having'.
Suggestion: to having
...food for a day. I will look forward to have your views on this plan and accordingly...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, look, moreover, so, well, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 238.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63445378151 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35636380721 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651260504202 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4468315331 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9166666667 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283694550756 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977909950607 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562815484202 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1576740671 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355949446339 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.