You received a letter from your friend informing you about his elderly parents are coming to visit in your area and he is asking for your advise on
- which places they should visit
- where should they live
- Invite them to do something with you
Dear Rakesh,
I have received your letter yesterday and over-the-moon that uncle and aunty are coming to Lagos. I have not seen uncle and aunty since 2 years.
Although you have mentioned they will be living in festac town, I can see them after my work. there are many good places to visit in that vicinity. I will send my driver and car in the morning and take them to the temple, shopping mall if they want to do some shopping. Superb market is there of the artist, they can visit there, as uncle like painting a lot.
In festac town, there are many 5 stars hotel. my favourate one is Golden Tulip. This hotel is in the middle of the town, so that there are far from traffic area. Its very convinent for them to go anywhere they want by walk too.
uncle and aunty would be living for 5 days, on Sunday I will take them for picnic. there is very nice beach out of the town. Its 3 hours journey from that hotel, so we will be leaving early and enjoy whole day. early evening we will come back.
Waiting a lot to see uncle and aunty.
Yours
JK
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...tac town, I can see them after my work. there are many good places to visit in that v...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...tac town, there are many 5 stars hotel. my favourate one is Golden Tulip. This hot...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Uncle
...to go anywhere they want by walk too. uncle and aunty would be living for 5 days, o...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... on Sunday I will take them for picnic. there is very nice beach out of the town. Its...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Early
...l be leaving early and enjoy whole day. early evening we will come back. Waiting a l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.20297029703 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.97182014863 2.54303337028 78% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594059405941 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.672603309 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.6 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4666666667 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 4.34317383033 9% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205457040743 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616671788757 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559663886655 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842837415377 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611016056353 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 8.37731958763 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.49 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.24 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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