You recently attended a concert festival. You had a great time; however, there was a problem that made experience less enjoyable.
Write a letter to your best friend. In your letter:
• Describe the best part of the show.
• Describe what the issue was.
• Describe the present you bought for him/her.
I hope you are doing great. I am writing this letter to tell you about the concert which I attended last weekend that was held in Alexandra Stadium for 2 days. It was so wonderful and amazing. You know, our all favourite performers participated in this festival such as One Direction Pop Band, Jack & Jills, and Taylor Swift. I wish you were there and we both enjoy together. The best part is Taylor Swift comes between the audience and sang a song, and I took photographs with her. Moreover, in the whole stadium, big LED screens are assembled so that no one misses a single shot of entertainment.
Apart from this, there was one issue which I observed, the bodyguards of all the performers. They were not allowing anyone to come on the stage. The crowd was crazy for dancing and singing with the celebrities. I saw, one guy tried to jump over the stage, unfortunately, the guards pushed him back hard, and he gots hurt. I felt very bad for him.
Anyways, there were a number of shops nearby the stadium who were selling the audio and videotapes of the performers, along with their posters. I bought One Direction's latest song CD for you. I hope you like it and there is one surprise which I will give you when we meet each other.
I look forward to your reply at the earliest.
Yours Faithfully,
Jane
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'Directions the latest'.
Suggestion: Directions the latest
... along with their posters. I bought One Directions latest song CD for you. I hope you like it and...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ll give you when we meet each other. I look forward to your reply at the earli...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, if, look, moreover, so, apart from, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1079.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55274261603 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51305819246 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4607546193 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.4705882353 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9411764706 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58823529412 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190473028412 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595001518631 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048867142862 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952877339421 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609832215981 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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