You recently attended a conference and would like to give a presentation to your colleagues about it. Write a letter to your manager and include: The topic of the conference Why you want to present about it When it could be done
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to seek the permission about presenting the facts about the conference which I attended last week, to enlightening my coworkers about the useful information.
Last Monday, I attended a 2 days seminar on 'The advanced computing techniques'. It has proved to be very beneficial for me, as I came to know about many facts regarding fragmenting the computer memory to improve the performance of the personal device.
In our company, workers have to deal with a lot of data on daily basis, and some employees find it troublesome task to handle a bulk of information. Thus, discussing some modern techniques would definitely help them out to deal with this. They could also broaden the horizons of their knowledge and can teach others as well.
Therefore, I decided to sending some time on this Saturday after 2 o clock would be the best time, as most of people are free and would pay full concentration. It would be a great favor if you allow me to share my knowledge with the staff.
Looking forward for a prompt and positive response from your side.
Yours faithfully,
Armando
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 103, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...er 2 o clock would be the best time, as most of people are free and would pay full concentrati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88541666667 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78105492449 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677083333333 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4797047389 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229752496786 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726717569253 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699069328056 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104379397134 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863977506619 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.