You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter. say where you think you left the papers. explain why they are so impo

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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
. say where you think you left the papers
. explain why they are so important
. tell the manager what you want him to do

Dear Hotel Manager,

I am writing this letter to bring your attention towards the valuable papers left at the hotel. Firstly, I attended the meeting on Digital Marketing Summit at your hotel on 19th Jan 2017. If I remember correctly, you should be able to locate them probably in Cafeteria on the table number 43 because I was having lunch at that point of time.

Secondly, There were some highly classified papers mixed with the meeting papers. Furthermore, they are of the utmost importance to me because those papers should not be supposed to get leaked or lost in the public. Apart from this, I also forgot voter id card on the same day and realized it later that it was missing from my wallet.

I would be grateful if you can select very few trustworthy people to carry out this task to find those missing papers. You must make sure that this information should not go out to any media person or news channel.

I am looking forward to hear from you soon.

Yours Faithfully
Faizal Reza

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...r news channel. I am looking forward to hear from you soon. Yours Faithfully Fai...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65730337079 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34676175743 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685393258427 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8549860942 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 4.34317383033 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308683619055 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102943931368 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064466114068 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161766571077 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830745327465 0.0580467560999 143% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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