You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left come important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
1. Say where you think you left the papers
2. Explain why they are so important
3. tell the manager what you want him/her to do
“Life moves pretty fast. if you don’t stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it.”
– ferris, from ferris bueller’s day Off“Life moves pretty fast. if you don’t stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it.”
– ferris, from ferris bueller’s day Off“Life moves pretty fast. if you don’t stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it.”
– ferris, from ferris bueller’s day Off“Life moves pretty fast. if you don’t stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it.”
– ferris, from ferris bueller’s day Off“Life moves pretty fast. if you don’t stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it.”
– ferris, from ferris bueller’s day Off“Life moves pretty fast. if you don’t stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it.”
– ferris, from ferris bueller’s day Off“Life moves pretty fast. if you don’t stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it.”
– ferris, from ferris bueller’s day Off“Life moves pretty fast. if you don’t stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it.”
– ferris, from ferris bueller’s day Off“Life moves pretty fast. if you don’t stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it.”
– ferris, from ferris bueller’s day Off
- Some people think that child's success in adult life depends on the way their parents brought them up . do you agree or disagree. 84
- In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main cause of crime? How can we deal with those cause? 78
- You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you.Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter•advise them of your situation•explain how this is affecting you•request a new card 73
- Write letter to along time colleague that you will not be able to attend his/her good bye party.-Why you will not be able to attend-How you enjoyed working with her/him-How you will keep contact with him/her 73
- You have recently moved into a new house You want to tell your friend about your good news Write to your friend In the letter Describe the house Describe the neighbourhood Invite your friend to come and see the house You do not need to write any addresses 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
'Life moves pretty fast. if you don't stop and look around onc...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...;s day Off'Life moves pretty fast. if you don't stop and look around onc...
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Line 5, column 75, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...;s day Off'Life moves pretty fast. if you don't stop and look around onc...
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Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...;s day Off'Life moves pretty fast. if you don't stop and look around onc...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...;s day Off'Life moves pretty fast. if you don't stop and look around onc...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...;s day Off'Life moves pretty fast. if you don't stop and look around onc...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...;s day Off'Life moves pretty fast. if you don't stop and look around onc...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...;s day Off'Life moves pretty fast. if you don't stop and look around onc...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...;s day Off'Life moves pretty fast. if you don't stop and look around onc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43362831858 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1391864147 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 26.0 127.690721649 20% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.115044247788 0.622605031667 18% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 340.2 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 1.83505154639 490% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 1.44329896907 624% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.0037177715 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.8 76.5299724578 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.29896907216 233% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128648905457 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118263821462 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401085841586 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118889752869 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406972862841 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 8.37731958763 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 8.71597938144 166% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 1.72 7.59969072165 23% => Dale chall readability score is low.
difficult_words: 9.0 41.2886597938 22% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.