You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. Say where you think you left the papers. Explain why they are so important. Tell the manager what you want him/her to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to seek for your help to retrieve my highly confidential and important documents that I accidentally left at the Orchid hall, Sheraton hotel during the APEC summit yesterday.
It would have been a great event with thoughtful arrangements from the hotel until I felt bumped out because of my forgetfulness. After the meeting with all the regional delegates from ASEAN countries, I was in the hurry to the next meeting at another venues. Hence, I did not have time to check all the documents that I had with me. As soon as I reached my office, I realized that I left my black folder with my name one it - Mr.John Smith about the summit's itinerary and upcoming schedule on the table in the hall. If these documents are not with me, I would not be able to attend those following up activities of the event in the next few days.
Therefore, it would be much appreciated if you could help me a hand to get back these papers as soon as possible. I believe some ushers of the event would have found the folder and returned it to the Lost and found section of the hotel. Please do not hesitate to let me know any updates regarding this matter urgently and look forward to your reply. Thank you in advance!
Your faithfully,
John smith
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 431, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: John
...y black folder with my name one it - Mr.John Smith about the summits itinerary and u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52380952381 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5241071637 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.0947792662 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180866665847 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670784570416 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529711570094 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126453163149 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558917654528 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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