Dear Manager,
I am your regular customer where I usually prefer to get the kitchen equipment and in fact, most of the electronic devices in my home are from your reliable shop. I am writing this letter to get to your notice about one of the equipment I bought recently is not functioning as it should.
One week back, I bought an electronic water purifier cum heater which purifies the water and also gives hot water. It is by company Aerosmith with the model A25. However, It stopped heating the water and consequently, only normal water is being returned back. I have called up the shop regarding the issue for the plethora of times of which most of them went unanswered. Finally 3 days back they have registered my complaint with number RC09387 but no actions were taken regarding.
I request you and would like to address an immediate action to be taken to resolve the issue at the earliest possible.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
John.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returned'.
Suggestion: returned
...onsequently, only normal water is being returned back. I have called up the shop regarding th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 373, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...of which most of them went unanswered. Finally 3 days back they have registered my com...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, however, if, look, regarding, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7619047619 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49418257391 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678571428571 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0410283412 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8888888889 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 4.34317383033 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256196699595 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089622585214 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068676999121 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134202246767 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667621460341 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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