You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen, but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter• Describe the problem with the equipment• Explain what happened when you ph

Dear Sir

I hereby write to you to inform about the non working equipment that I got from your dealer and the neglect that I faced upon complaining about it.

I am a regular customer of your showroom and I have been buying my kitchenware since last three years. Last week, I happened to buy a hand blender of sonic brand. It was an expensive one and came with one year guarantee. Sadly, when I checked it at home it did not worked. I rang the shop and asked whether I would get a serviceman to inquire about the default in the device.

However, I got a very rude reply from the attender. I was shocked to be treated with such a behaviour. So, I decided to write to you. I have all the bills and cards and the equipment is intact. Kindly address my request so that I do not have to suffer further. I am really displeased about such an unfriendly and cold gesture from your sales boys. It was completely unexpected.

I will be thankful if you address my concern and replace the hand blender woth a working one.

Yours thankfully
Amrit

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'work'
Suggestion: work
...y, when I checked it at home it did not worked. I rang the shop and asked whether I wo...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...woth a working one. Yours thankfully Amrit
^^^
Line 12, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orking one. Yours thankfully Amrit
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39487179487 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46887794694 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605128205128 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2848200942 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.1333333333 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.53333333333 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217886036147 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064724210469 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499022278258 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12271510821 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338796334654 0.0580467560999 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.29 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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