You recently bought a piece of equipment for your work but it did not work.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment in your letter.
• Describe the problem with the equipment
• Explain how this problem is affecting your work
• Say what you want the shop or company to do
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I hope this letter finds you well. Recently, I had purchased a lamp from your branch, which is situated in North Nazimabad. Once, I reached home and plugged it, the lamp was operating fine. However, yesterday when I started it again, it became dysfunctional. Furthermore, it is becoming a problem for me and is affecting my daily routine.
Let me explain you in detail. As, I am a writer, therefore on numerous occasions, I need lamp to study and write letters and blogs. Nowadays, I have workload and due to the lamp, that I have purchased, I haven't been able to concentrate on my work. Moreover, it has started to become a nuisance for me. Furthermore, I have lodged a complaint on your help line to resolve my issue.
Therefore, it is requested to kindly look into this matter and resolve the issue at your earliest. As, it is very difficult for me to take my time out and get back to your shop for replacement procedure. Hence, I would request you for a favour to arrange a pick-up and drop-off for the replacement.
Regards,
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| 2019-01-26 | ahmedarbani | 73 | view |
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...ck-up and drop-off for the replacement. Regards,
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...p-off for the replacement. Regards,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64171122995 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81740544766 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625668449198 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.0593447751 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.7692307692 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3846153846 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215143226057 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652374518953 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373734009481 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137716049772 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132773392046 0.0580467560999 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.