You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course.
Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter,
• describe what you enjoyed about the course
• say how much cooking you've done since the course
• suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter with regards to the wonderful cookery course held by Chef Sanjeev Kapoor.
I am Tim Frank and enrolled in cookery course in the month of January 2020 which was held in Mumbai for 3 days. I was very nervous before enrolling into the course as I was unaware about basic cooking. I was fascinated with each and every part of the course. It was well planned starting from introduction followed by practicals and then presentation with theory part. I enjoyed bakery part a lot and made notes too for cakes and pastries.
Whenever I get time after college hours during weekends, I have my hands on bakery products. Recently I prepared Chocolate Brownie cake which was taught during the lecture with some Donouts and croissants and invited my friends who are very much fond of it.
There will be summer vacation which will be starting from the month of May for 2 months, so I would request you to schedule one more such course for a month. As per my opinion, you can inculcate sea food dishes too in the next lecture as it is easily found in our country but delicate to prepare it.
Let me know when the next cookery course will take place and I will be glad to enroll in it. I will be waiting for your response.
Yours Faithfully,
Tim Frank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...20 which was held in Mumbai for 3 days. I was very nervous before enrolling into ...
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Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e as I was unaware about basic cooking. I was fascinated with each and every part...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54042553191 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34774098486 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629787234043 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0429130309 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0769230769 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84615384615 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222346666823 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731838157822 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614813079586 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124943266397 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695617912836 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.