You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course.
Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter,
• describe what you enjoyed about the course
• say how much cooking you've done since the course
• suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer
Write at least 150 words.
Dear John,
This is a feedback email about the recently completed cookery course on meat and bread.
Along the duration of the course, I have immensly enjoyed the process of preparation and the hands on experience that I have received in choosing the idle animal for the meal. I also benefited from interaction with various foreign students and learnt a great deal about their tastes and preferences.
Since June 30,2020, the last day at the institute, I have volunteered myself for community service to serve food for the homeless. I was able to cook 3 times a week there and also as I stay alone in my apartment, I have experiemented with various recipes that I have learnt and created my signature dish and named it as prawn vindaloo!
Although there are varied courses that are on offer by the institute, I believe that given the infrastructure available offering a course of deserts will attract more admissions to the school.
Thank you once again for carrying out knowledgeable course.
Yours Faithfully,
Mihira Muppidi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...institute, I have volunteered myself for community service to serve food for the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0289017341 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80310467818 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670520231214 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.778753777 44.8134815571 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 124.285714286 76.5299724578 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 16.8248392259 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.14285714286 4.34317383033 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212715803249 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874914834606 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749357679682 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120848536763 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953275272133 0.0580467560999 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 8.37731958763 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 70.7449484536 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.