You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school asked for your feedback on this course.
Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter
. describe what you enjoyed about the course.
. say how much cooking you've done since the course
. suggest another cookery course you'd like school to offer.
. suggest another cookery course you'd like school to offer.
Dear Sir and Madam,
I here by thanking you all to conduct the cookery course, which was ended up on last week. Further, I take this opportunity to say thanks all the admin and other staff who have done greate job behind the screen and giving wonderful series of lesson with fun.
I really enjoyed through out the 6 module. Here I would like to thankful to chief chef who create us wonderful session with his experience and I really enjoyed on his way of cooking with fun. He made cooking table to fun place and taught how to live on it.
We had opportunity to prepare 6 dishes in 3 varieties such as chinees, western and Indian cussins. Actually I am appreciate if you can oorgarnise Sri Lankan traditional cooking short course on next school holiday season which help on us to prepare to our national events.
Once again thank you very much on course you have offered and please extend the same to your all team including the chief chef.
Best reagrds,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
. suggest another cookery course youd lik...
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Line 1, column 3, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Suggest
. suggest another cookery course youd like school...
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Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'd
. suggest another cookery course youd like school to offer. Dear Sir and Mad...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r, I take this opportunity to say thanks all the admin and other staff who have d...
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Line 4, column 18, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...s of lesson with fun. I really enjoyed through out the 6 module. Here I would like to than...
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Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'appreciated'.
Suggestion: appreciated
...stern and Indian cussins. Actually I am appreciate if you can oorgarnise Sri Lankan tradit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, really, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59016393443 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30073034348 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677595628415 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.0038460116 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258757871647 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873765372051 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872142231084 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148665809619 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073688428829 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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