You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school asked for your feedback on this course.
Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter
. describe what you enjoyed about the course.
. say how much cooking you've done since the course
. suggest another cookery course you'd like school to offer.
Dear Ms. Susan,
I am glad to hear from you and writing in reply of your feedback request of “Chinese Cuisine”, an eight-week course I was enrolled in October last year.
I must say the course was worthful for me, as my husband is a big fan of Chinese food. Cooking is one of my favorite hobby and in this way, I not only serve my husband his favorite dishes but also enjoy my spare time now. Another wonderful thing was your teaching style, from practical and entertaining teaching approach you taught us a range of dishes.
It is been two months now; I am cooking different types of pasta and noodles twice every week. Last weekend, I tried egg fried rice with Manchurian which was delicious. We had Chinese cuisine on three out of six weekends since, and every time my family loved the taste and aroma.
I am recommending this course to all my friends who are beginners at cooking. However, for myself, I want you to please launch some baking classes through which I could learn some bakery items. That will really polish my skills and improve my baking.
Eagerly waiting for your reply and some similar course launching news of me.
Thank you.
Yours Sincerely,
Wajeeha Umer
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...proach you taught us a range of dishes. It is been two months now; I am cooking ...
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...of me. Thank you. Yours Sincerely, Wajeeha Umer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8009478673 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46737887068 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691943127962 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6569466876 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4166666667 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145467340243 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573407912611 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453638324726 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0740237192501 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332945472732 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.