You recently hired a restaurant to host an office party at work, but there were several problems with the food and service.
Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:
Give details of the food and services you ordered
Describe the problems that occurred
Explain what you want the restaurant to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing to complain about the dissatisfactory food and service during our office party hosted by your restaurant last Saturday.
First of all, I would like to mention the items and service we ordered. As it was our annual party celebration, we requested choco chips cake, followed by chicken chilly starters for everyone along with mocktails. Lastly, we asked for poolside tables for our dinner.
We expected the chocolate flavour cake, instead, we were served fruitcake. Unfortunately, due to unavailability of chocolate flavour and despite disliking fruitcake by most of us in the party, we started the celebration with it. In addition, because of shortage of mocktails all party members were not served with it and we had to replace it by lemonade. Furthermore, though the starters were served hot and nicely, it tasted sour and bitter. Consequently, our mood for having a nice dinner was already spoiled. Finally, they also did not make our seating arrangement in poolside.
I request you to provide 50% refund of the total bill paid to you. Moreover, a written apology to my team would be really appreciable.
Hope you would take these steps to maintain our cordial relationship and revert me back soon!
Yours Sincerely,
xxx
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, lastly, moreover, really, so, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15048543689 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87006532247 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674757281553 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4428177173 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6153846154 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 4.34317383033 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149718272498 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483818640058 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644809669515 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094892338368 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845864905842 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.