Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am one of the regular customer of your renowned restaurant. My main purpose of penning down this letter to express my disappointment regarding the food and services of your restaurant.
To explain my inconvenience, I would like to tell you that I hired your place last Saturday evening to organize an annual office party. I requested a chocolate chips cake, following with cocktails and some cheese snacks for 65 people for the celebrations, but unfortunately we did not receive the same. Instead of chocolate flavor cake, we were served with the fruit flavor. Moreover, not everyone of us was served with the drinks of our choice and their occurred a shortage of snacks as well. After all these, when I contacted the head chef of the premises, told me that there was a party in the morning where all the ingredients got over and their order were unable to reach them due to a strike among the shops. Although, we were celebrating this day to make it memorable, everything turned wrong.
I would like to suggest you to kindly ensure the availability of services for the customers. Also, I request you to provide me a concession for my next party at your restaurant next month.
I hope you will take my suggestion positively.
Thanking you.
Yours sincerely,
Ankita Sharma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
Dear Sir/ Madam, I am one of the regular customer of your...
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...e food and services of your restaurant. To explain my inconvenience, I would lik...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ively. Thanking you. Yours sincerely, Ankita Sharma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, regarding, so, well, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82959641256 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79964318632 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641255605381 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7117002669 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.75 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221675147552 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721181589307 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503985179227 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116768703063 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038804310155 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.