You recently met a manger of a new company started in your city. After the meeting, the manager wrote you a letter offering a job at this company.
Write to him
How do you feel about the job?
Why can’t you accept it?
Provide a reference to your friend who might be interested
Dear Sir,
Thank you for the opportunity.
It was a pleasure meeting you in the marketing event last week. I am really thankful that you have offered me the position of “Senior Tax Manager” in the advisory firm. But unfortunately, I cannot accept the offer as I have a bond with my current employer. Also, I am really satisfied and happy with my current employer and other facilities.
Though I cannot accept the job offer, but I would like to refer one of my friend who is seeking a job opportunity and he is experienced in global taxation. Please let me know, if you would like to meet him to discuss his credentials. After hearing from you, I can ask him to send you his CV ta take this forward.
Once again thank you for the job offer, I regret not accepting offer but after completing the bond with my current employer, I would connect you for any open opportunities.
Looking forward for your reply.
Yours faithfully
Kritika Rastogi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Thank you for the opportunity. It was ...
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Line 9, column 174, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...connect you for any open opportunities. Looking forward for your reply. Yours...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72781065089 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79581885324 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633136094675 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8926187812 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6363636364 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326008310397 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116418104863 0.0766984524023 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677509424474 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170977898775 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06833839893 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.