Dear Reeta,
How have you been. Sorry for taking such a long time to write back to you. Finally I have written to invite you to visit my new house in Bangalore.
As you know, I have been saving up to buy a house of my own and you would be delighted to know that my dream did come true. I would love for you to come and visit my new place. Should the 10th of August be fine with you. Its a Friday and you could stay over for the weekend like the good old days.
My new house is in a quite neighborhood away from hustle of the city life. Since its just Rakesh & me living in the house, we opted for a small 2 bedroom house with a warm kitchen. The mornings are very beautiful here and you should see the sun pouring into the kitchen. It is a real bliss to watch while sipping on hot tea. There is also a beautiful garden which i have filled with lovely plants and it is my favorite spot to spend the evenings at.
The scenery is so lovely that it feels like home instantly. That is what I love the most of this house and I wish I never have to leave the house. When you have a house that feels like a vacation spot, who needs to go on one anyways.
I am eagerly waiting to show off the new house to you. Hope to hear from you soon.
Lots of love,
Malita.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
... such a long time to write back to you. Finally I have written to invite you to visit m...
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Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ld the 10th of August be fine with you. Its a Friday and you could stay over for th...
^^^
Line 7, column 20, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('quite') instead an adjective, or a noun ('neighborhood') instead of another adjective.
...he good old days. My new house is in a quite neighborhood away from hustle of the city life. Sinc...
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Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'house' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'houses'.
Suggestion: houses
...e house, we opted for a small 2 bedroom house with a warm kitchen. The mornings are v...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 222, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one anyway', 'an anyway', or simply 'anyways'?
Suggestion: one anyway; an anyway; anyways
...ike a vacation spot, who needs to go on one anyways. I am eagerly waiting to show off th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, finally, if, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 256.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 3.96875 4.54256449028 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.91693387937 2.54303337028 75% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5703125 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1590466236 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.4444444444 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2222222222 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 7.41237113402 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338557324366 0.216113520407 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110787141509 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766180878077 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214867610719 0.12726935374 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068610942407 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.4 8.37731958763 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.15 8.71597938144 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.75 7.59969072165 76% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.