Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is believed that as a result of growing supermarkets in some countries, local businesses are not able to thrive. this has led to the belief that shutting down small business will lead to death of local communities.
I completely agree with this fact.
Firstly, local businesses such as fruits & vegetable shops help a lot of local people to take care of their families. By growing and selling these produce locally, farmers and locals are able to earn enough to feed themselves and take care of their families.
Secondly, when a produce is grown locally, there are no extra charges to be paid for packaging, delivery, transport or for middle men. this reduces the cost of the product and it is beneficial for the buyer as it is sold at a much cheaper price as compared to some of the supermarket products.
Last but not the least, local businesses also help the locals to gain employment and job security. this improves the standard of living of the poeple to a great extent. when a new shop is opened, it is an opportunity for the people to find jobs to educate their children. when there are enough jobs in their own home town, there is no real need to leave the place and go to the cities in search of jobs. this helps them to stay together with their families.
In conclusion, I would say, it is the responsibility of each individual to ensure that supermarkets do not replace local businesses and the Government should take strict action to stop this from happening. The welfare of local businesses should be taken seriously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70479704797 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64435881498 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549815498155 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9064404183 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0714285714 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288656287758 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105536451455 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10354826344 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148486359798 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126332976886 0.056905535591 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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