You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part time job. Write a letter to the restaurant's manager. In your letter ,
- Explain that you would like to apply for the job
-Give some details of any relevant experience that you have
- Specify the days and times that would suit you .
Dear sir,
Good Day. Recently, I have come across an advertisement related to some part time vacancies available at your restaurant. I have gone through the detail provided in the notice and I find it suitable for me. Hence, I would like to submit my candidature for the position vacant with you.
I would like to mention that I am carrying six months of part-time working experience with Mcdonald cafe as a cashier where my duty includes the order acceptance, billing and cash handling at the counters. Currently, I have enrolled with my Post graduation in finance at the university and to cope up with my regular expenses I am in need of the part-time job for three hours a day except for entire week. Here, I am forwarding my detailed resume for your kind perusal enclosed herewith.
I hope my qualification and experience will commensurate your requirements and you will give me an opportunity to work with your restaurant.
Awaiting for your prompt reply. Thanking you.
Yours Faithfully
Bhumika Suryavanshi
Comments
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
No. of Words: 171 220 //you may put more content
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 171 220
No. of Characters: 821 1500
No. of Different Words: 110 120
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.616 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.801 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.883 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 57 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 47 40
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 37 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.154 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.063 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.154 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.321 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.721 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.148 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...across an advertisement related to some part time vacancies available at your restaurant....
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: Awaiting; Waiting for
...unity to work with your restaurant. Awaiting for your prompt reply. Thanking you. You...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['hence', 'if', 'so', 'except for']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.272727272727 0.220444632235 124% => OK
Verbs: 0.155080213904 0.167888034529 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0427807486631 0.0606518309736 71% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0106951871658 0.0506257000042 21% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.144385026738 0.118615021944 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128342245989 0.107062808482 120% => OK
Participles: 0.0534759358289 0.041066498444 130% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.93407612521 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0267379679144 0.0385302599488 69% => OK
Particles: 0.00534759358289 0.00132118243153 405% => OK
Determiners: 0.0641711229947 0.0714148451538 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0213903743316 0.0191574576366 112% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00534759358289 0.00930345855455 57% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1027.0 1141.60824742 90% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.134020619 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.00584795322 5.53046319177 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78085437643 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.345029239766 0.284621296913 121% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.27485380117 0.211203875043 130% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.216374269006 0.133321485273 162% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.140350877193 0.0843313296314 166% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93407612521 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654970760234 0.622163163488 105% => OK
Word variations: 65.0107434891 62.8969750728 103% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 12.9587628866 85% => OK
Sentence length: 15.5454545455 16.4300151701 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9087676185 44.7399317507 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3636363636 90.9928171075 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 16.4300151701 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.363636363636 0.613754768223 59% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.09278350515 96% => OK
Readability: 43.0308346624 37.5504026743 115% => OK
Elegance: 1.46551724138 1.13073093955 130% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346763128175 0.331212695627 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0947906837471 0.0927372745006 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0837988539878 0.0736520305886 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.558044421674 0.579516596996 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.230576669309 0.180689518051 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120818062531 0.122183219658 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772081783671 0.0765303033291 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.213522212468 0.211926503985 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.100606403622 0.0737400523855 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206713504367 0.203819188451 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062562191819 0.067151250289 93% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.45360824742 80% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.0206185567 124% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 4.73195876289 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.56701030928 156% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 8.32989690722 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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