You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part time job Write a letter to the restaurant s manager In your letter Explain that you would like to apply for the job Give some details of any relevant experience that you have Specify t

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 121, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... for chef that I saw in public newspaper , So I would like to apply for this posit...
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Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is position. My name is Pooja Patel and I was assistant chef in 4 star hotel at ...
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Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hotel' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hotels'.
Suggestion: hotels
...tel and I was assistant chef in 4 star hotel at Mumbai. Moreover i have creative cul...
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Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...sistant chef in 4 star hotel at Mumbai. Moreover i have creative culinary skills that i ...
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Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...er i have creative culinary skills that i am applying in my all new creative dish...
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Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...in healthy and innovative way of cooking . As my previous experience of assistan...
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Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...healthy and innovative way of cooking . As my previous experience of assistant che...
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Line 4, column 60, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...rience of assistant chef about 3 years. Additionally i was also gave presentation about new...
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Line 4, column 73, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...istant chef about 3 years. Additionally i was also gave presentation about new r...
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Line 4, column 84, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'given'.
Suggestion: given
... about 3 years. Additionally i was also gave presentation about new recipes and how...
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Line 4, column 101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dditionally i was also gave presentation about new recipes and how to put special...
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Line 4, column 163, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d how to put special touch in the dishes . Furthermore I had great collaborative s...
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Line 4, column 166, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...ow to put special touch in the dishes . Furthermore I had great collaborative skills with o...
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Line 4, column 250, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... with other staff members of the motel. Therefore it would be easy for me to settle down ...
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Line 5, column 32, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...aurant. Lastly, I noticed that this is part time job. So this is very convenient for me....
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Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...now that my working days would be Monday , Wednesday or Friday afternoon and eveni...
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Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'those days'?
Suggestion: this day; those days
... would be available until late night of those day. I am waiting your positive response ab...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e response about in this job position. I look forward hearing from you soon You...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, lastly, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, you know, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56097560976 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70955728492 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624390243902 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9686656778 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9166666667 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 2.54639175258 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225196354153 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755188007205 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739613936327 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12575594789 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862087610682 0.0580467560999 149% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.