Dear Sir,
My name is Valerie Hanniel, a reputable and industrious customers service personnel that has worked with world-class restaurants and Five- star hotels around the nation. I am writing in respect to the advert placement I came across on the Daily Newspaper on the 23rd of March, 2019. I will like to apply for a part-time job for the post of a waiter.
Working in the customer service unit with an explicit experience of 10years has yielded excellence in my career. As a meticulous worker, I tend to make sure the needs of all the customers are met and give detailed attention to every complaint.
In addition, There is a saying that "Customers are always right". As a waiter, my duty is to render good services to our clients making sure the arena is conducive, serene and immaculate respective of negativities received from the public. My working experience with Domino Pizza boosted my communication skills which are paramount in dealing with customers. Also, being the first contact person, i can speak varieties of international and local languages for better communication.
Furthermore, I'm currently studying Business Administration at the university during the week. I will grateful if working on weekends will be considered, preferably Fridays, Saturdays and Sundays between 9 am to 5 pm. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Valerie Hanniel
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'March 2019'.
Suggestion: March 2019
...s on the Daily Newspaper on the 23rd of March, 2019. I will like to apply for a part-time j...
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Message: Did you mean 'would'?
Suggestion: would
...Newspaper on the 23rd of March, 2019. I will like to apply for a part-time job for t...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
.... Also, being the first contact person, i can speak varieties of international an...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...r better communication. Furthermore, Im currently studying Business Administrat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29777777778 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12279077465 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671111111111 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3171870996 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6923076923 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3076923077 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126695345097 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455593758631 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606199166029 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0662751569907 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037109576884 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 8.71597938144 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 7.59969072165 127% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 41.2886597938 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.