You recently organised on all day meeting for your company which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for Lunch.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel, In your letter
- Say what the participants liked about the hotel.
- Explain why they were unhappy about the food.
- Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter with regards to a full day meeting which I had organized in the conference room at your hotel. Although the meeting went smoothly, towards the end the participants gave a feedback, where expressed their satisfaction as well as their grievances.
Let me explain in detail. Firstly, most were very happy with the politeness and alertness of the staff. Not only were all are requirements were catered, but they even went beyond our expectation to meet our unusually difficult client demands. Secondly, the room was well lit and ventilated which was extremely important as we had people of different age groups. Sadly, last but not least the food was a major disappointed because it was served cold. Consequently, the bread turned into rubber and the gravy was just distasteful. Moreover, some found the food to be stale and unappetizing.
All in all the services and facilities of the hotel are top quality, however it would be better if the catering department was changed. they are hampering the image of the hotel. Furthermore, since you are the manager it would be advisable to be present during such important events to ensure such situations do not arise in future.
I look forward to your reply and hope some quick action is taken.
Yours faithfully,
Mary Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.48453608247 240% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97321428571 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7564713977 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65625 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0776216996 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5714285714 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 4.34317383033 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284875137276 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770908531033 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061600732721 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137594573585 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076910007243 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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